now that you are broken...
allow me to listen...
hear all those broken shards scattered over the floor..
let me fix them for you..
even though I don't know how..
maybe..
just maybe..
all I can do is just sit here...
stare at this PC's screen..
and listen to your rants...
maybe..
just maybe...
with this I can cure your broken pieces...
This is so beautiful and touching! From plain admiration to wanting to fix the broken pieces. How many people would want to do that? This is the most touching part.
ReplyDeleteI love the flow of thoughts in this well-written poem. Keep it up!
glad that you liked it :)
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate it!